My holiday in Disneypark

by mirambekabdrakhimov
(switzerland)

Hi Mirambek!

thanks for writing your story on our blog. We have made some adjustments to your article. Here is the corrected text:

I started my journey to Disney Park near Paris at 4 o'clock on Saturday morning. I drove for eight hours from Switzerland. I like Disney Park and I like Paris too.

I stayed for four days. I spent 2 days in Disney Park, 1 day in Versailles and 1 day in Paris. It was the best holiday I have ever had.
That's all I want to write.
Bye

Original text
On saturday at 4 am ....


Tenses Used:

Past simple: It describes an action or event in the past, the time of the event is definable. In this case examples are I started../ I stayed...

Present simple: In this case I like .. refers to a general truth opinion or belief which is currently held.

Present perfect: ..I have ever had. Here we refer to the past which continues to meet the present, so the statement refers to all past time and now.